The Green Dove by Jay042 Page 5

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The Green Dove by Jay042 Page 5
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Proxy170 31st Oct 2017, 5:29 PM edit delete reply
Proxy170
WOW Jay, 5 pages!! Fantastic work!
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 7:10 PM edit delete reply
Jay042
Thanks for saying so! Once I had this idea it didn't take long to knock these pages out.
BluRaven C. Houvener 31st Oct 2017, 6:50 PM edit delete reply
BluRaven C. Houvener
Action packed, clever censorship, and a story that just sucks you in! Two thumbs way up!
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 7:12 PM edit delete reply
Jay042
I've kind of wanting to do a character very much in the vein of Batman '66's King Tut and this was the perfect opportunity.
Cooke 31st Oct 2017, 7:19 PM edit delete reply
Cooke
This was a good short story. You managed to fit so much in just 5 pages. Character intros, a chase, action and some introspection. Nice touch on Dracula. Get a kind of 50's gangster vibe from him.
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 10:12 PM edit delete reply
Jay042
The character of the Green Dove came across as rather introspective. I was trying to convey that with the internal monologue.
HeSerpenty 31st Oct 2017, 9:46 PM edit delete reply
HeSerpenty
Dang Jay! This was awesome!
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 10:13 PM edit delete reply
Jay042
Thanks!
joeyballast 31st Oct 2017, 10:49 PM edit delete reply
joeyballast
Damn this must have been a lot of work. Nice job!
Jay042 1st Nov 2017, 4:41 PM edit delete reply
Jay042
It was just a couple days of work for me. My schedule is pretty free so I can concentrate on things like this without a lot of distractions.
Cartoonist_at_Large 1st Nov 2017, 12:10 AM edit delete reply
Cartoonist_at_Large
Halloween team-ups are the best kind of team-ups! And let's hear it for all the hard-working, conveniently-placed captions, speech bubbles, sound effects and flying pieces of bandage that preserved Kazza and Gwenna's dignity throughout, shall we? How DO they do it?
Podgor 1st Nov 2017, 3:48 AM edit delete reply
Podgor
This was amazing. You did an excellent job of conveying Green Dove's mental state and the action sequences were really dynamic.
Jay042 1st Nov 2017, 4:41 PM edit delete reply
Jay042
Glad to hear your approval!
AugustaCaesar 4th Nov 2017, 2:27 AM edit delete reply
AugustaCaesar
Wow! Great story-line and crossover. Very nicely done. :)