Pow! Right in the Nostalgia, Page 4 by Mayyday

10th Jul 2015, 1:55 AM in 2015 Summer Picnic!
Pow! Right in the Nostalgia, Page 4 by Mayyday
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HeSerpenty 10th Jul 2015, 1:55 AM
goes on a picnic with

Art by Mayyday!

PAGE 4 of 4!


Centcomm 10th Jul 2015, 2:15 AM
this is made of pure awesome Mayyday! :D nicely DONE!
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 2:59 PM
Thanks! I hope you liked Gali's cameo. ;)
Centcomm 10th Jul 2015, 3:04 PM
I wanna frame it ! she looks fantastic ! I am very very happy! :D
MST3KFan 10th Jul 2015, 6:53 AM
*sits in absolute awe at what has been seen*

Oh, man! Mayyday this is awesome. And crazy HUGE. O_o I love how you managed to incorporate the various characters as they're normally drawn into things before everything is altered.

The Portal gun coming into play even! XD

Doc being referred to as Noah Antwiler/Dr. Insano again!

So many callbacks and nods! And that ending. XDXDXDXD Only Charlotte would decide playing a Mario Kart Tournament after all the craziness that has happened. XD
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 7:40 AM
Glad you like it Misty (can I call you Misty?)

I definitely tried to pack in as many nods and pop culture references as I could, given the nature of your comic. In case you were curious, a full list follows:



- Panel 1 is a recreation of a shot from the old 90's X-Men cartoon intro.

- That's a CM Punk zombie in Panel 2

- Obviously, Charlotte uses her Portal gun again. She also quotes Kyle Reese/The Terminator for her opening line.


- Charlotte calls the zombies "Deadites" as she Portals away.

- I tried as best I could to make everyone seem/act like they do in in their home universe. Little things like the way the panels are arranged (You can see the diference between Panel 1 and the rest of the page as they leave the Breathers-verse) to the way Charlotte's speech bubbles connect to the frame while Kat's do not. Char's text is also hand written, while Kat uses a font. Doc also uses non-curved speech bubble tails for his brief cameo.

- Charlotte once again confuses Doc for Doctor Insano/Spoony/Noah Antwiler.

- For the 'everyone' panel, some of those were redrawn/traced (Kat, Charlotte, Mayy, and Annabelle), some were donated to be dropped in as-is (Galina), and the rest were all photoshopped out of their home comics and placed in the scene. A weird quirk of this is that Abby and James ended up looking at each other, so I just ran with it in future pages.


- Charlotte goes all anime-reaction and uses her catchphrase 'Startropical!'

- "Stabilizing Quantum Differentials" was very nearly "Reversing polarity of the neutron flow."

- In Panel 3, I don't know how well it comes across, but it's supposed to be the opposite of the eventual end result. They're both drawn in the PRitN style, but colored and shaded like Breathers characters. This gets flipped in all remaining panels.


- In Panel 1, Reality ensues for Lilith's hair. Also, I find Amy's shoes to be adorable.

- For Panel 4, they all have different controllers. Annabelle has a Wii wheel bacause it's the closest to what she's probably used to. Charlotte has a Wiimote held sideways so it resembles an NES controller. Kat has a generic third-party block because she really doesn't care about form, only function. And Mayy has a Classic Controller because it's the closest to most 'modern' controllers that she probably uses.

- Amy wearing Kat's coat while sitting with Benedict is also totally adorable.

- Charlotte has a Dragonzord belt buckle because of course she does.

- The 'The End' text is a mix of both comics' logos.


HOOOO-boy. I think that about covers it. Glad you liked the pages Misty! And for those who didn't know about their characters' cameos. Uh, SURPRISE! Lol hope you liked it too!
JammyTheBirb 10th Jul 2015, 9:20 AM
Man, this wad MADE OF AWESOME!
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 9:30 AM
Thanks! I'm glad y'all enjoyed it! :)
alston123 10th Jul 2015, 9:34 AM
Wow. This was amazing! I love it! You put so much work into it. Man. Very creative. :3
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 9:42 AM
Thank you! Lol yeah, I procrastinated WAY too long on this assignment and ended up with a few almost-literal sleepless nights. It was worth it, though.
zartala 10th Jul 2015, 11:29 AM
This was so much fun to read through! Love the art style shifts and everything about the mini-comic! XD
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 11:49 AM
I'm glad you liked it, your piece for Breathers was amazing!
Alicia 10th Jul 2015, 11:33 AM
Oh. My. GOSH! I did NOT expect to see any of my characters in this exchange (since I wasn't able to partake in it this time) so I thought I'd just sit back and watch... And Annabelle appears! Mayyday, this is so awesome! That you would include my character... It seriously makes my day! And you draw her so cute too! Why didn't I give Annabelle lips? XD She looks adorable with them!

Seriously, THANK YOU! <3
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 11:50 AM
I'm glad you like it! I was a little hesitant to put in characters who I had not 'cleared' with the original artists, but I figured the surprise would be worth it. :)
Zanreo 10th Jul 2015, 3:47 PM
This comic was really fun to read :D I liked seeing those different art styles at first, and then everything done in your style! Nice ending.
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 4:23 PM
Thanks! It was fun to do!

SPOILER ALERT: Benedict inexplicably wins the Mario Kart Tournament.
HapyCow 11th Jul 2015, 4:53 PM
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 10th Jul 2015, 4:50 PM
Caley Tibbittz Collopy

Also: Armless Amy is not gonna win this tournament.
Mayyday 10th Jul 2015, 5:22 PM
Amy actually ends up placing second behind Benedict. They have a friendly rivalry going.
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 11th Jul 2015, 10:00 AM
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
With what arms, sir? With what ARMS?
Trancedeliquist 10th Jul 2015, 6:39 PM
Omg! You nailed it while rocking it!!!
Mayyday 11th Jul 2015, 5:30 AM
Thanks! :)
HapyCow 11th Jul 2015, 4:52 PM
Dude that was amazing, I really like the way you drew Abby :) thank you so much for including her!! Also yeeeaaah Mario kart! I wanna play with them, haha. Amazing job!
Mayyday 11th Jul 2015, 6:18 PM
Thanks! And really, who DOESN'T want to play Mario Kart at any given time?
shibazoid! 11th Jul 2015, 6:03 PM
James! :D he looks so short, or else Abby is 8 feet tall! I can totally see those two being buddies anyhow. C:

Nice page, duder! Thanks for the cameo c':
Mayyday 11th Jul 2015, 6:19 PM
He was, uh, brought down to a 'normal' height during the reality reset wave on page 3. Yeah, that's it. That is totally the canon explanation, and certainly not something I just made up just now (perish the thought!)
HeSerpenty 12th Jul 2015, 4:53 PM
THIS is....amazing @__@
Like.... I"m so impressed by this! The time it must've taken! SO clever and so cool!! When I looked at it for the first time before uploading it I was like ":O!! Dayum!!"

Awesome work Mayyday!!!
Mayyday 13th Jul 2015, 3:36 PM
Thanks! I freaking love PRitN, so yeah, this one kinda took on a life of its own. :P
Matt Knab 13th Jul 2015, 4:58 AM
Matt Knab
Haha, that was great!
Mayyday 13th Jul 2015, 3:36 PM
I'm glad you liked it!