The Green Dove by Jay042 Page 5

The Green Dove by Jay042 Page 5
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JammyTheBirb 31st Oct 2017, 1:20 PM



Proxy170 31st Oct 2017, 1:29 PM
WOW Jay, 5 pages!! Fantastic work!
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 3:10 PM
Thanks for saying so! Once I had this idea it didn't take long to knock these pages out.
BluRaven C. Houvener 31st Oct 2017, 2:50 PM
BluRaven C. Houvener
Action packed, clever censorship, and a story that just sucks you in! Two thumbs way up!
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 3:12 PM
I've kind of wanting to do a character very much in the vein of Batman '66's King Tut and this was the perfect opportunity.
Cooke 31st Oct 2017, 3:19 PM
This was a good short story. You managed to fit so much in just 5 pages. Character intros, a chase, action and some introspection. Nice touch on Dracula. Get a kind of 50's gangster vibe from him.
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 6:12 PM
The character of the Green Dove came across as rather introspective. I was trying to convey that with the internal monologue.
HeSerpenty 31st Oct 2017, 5:46 PM
Dang Jay! This was awesome!
Jay042 31st Oct 2017, 6:13 PM
joeyballast 31st Oct 2017, 6:49 PM
Damn this must have been a lot of work. Nice job!
Jay042 1st Nov 2017, 12:41 PM
It was just a couple days of work for me. My schedule is pretty free so I can concentrate on things like this without a lot of distractions.
Cartoonist_at_Large 31st Oct 2017, 8:10 PM
Halloween team-ups are the best kind of team-ups! And let's hear it for all the hard-working, conveniently-placed captions, speech bubbles, sound effects and flying pieces of bandage that preserved Kazza and Gwenna's dignity throughout, shall we? How DO they do it?
Lord Myk 31st Oct 2017, 11:48 PM
Lord Myk
This was amazing. You did an excellent job of conveying Green Dove's mental state and the action sequences were really dynamic.
Jay042 1st Nov 2017, 12:41 PM
Glad to hear your approval!
AugustaCaesar 3rd Nov 2017, 10:27 PM
Wow! Great story-line and crossover. Very nicely done. :)